By Emma! :)
Tuesday, November 16, 2010
My recount on leaving Riverdale School! :)
By Emma! :)
Tuesday, October 19, 2010
My term 4 writing moderation.
Emma Smith
Lc13
Riverdale School
20th October 2010
Ideas-
I slipped. OWWW. Oh no. BRRRRRR.
‘Wait for me Patrick’. I called as I climbed the sand dunes.
‘NO’. He called. ‘Fine then’ I said.
Once I had climbed the first sand dune I sore him sliding down one. At once I hurried
Because I didn’t want to be left behind. As I got to the sand dune,
He had slided down I saw he was at the bottom waving to me.
‘Hi’ he said. As I waved back to him I leaned over a bit to far
And suddenly the sand from behind me moved and I slipped and fell.
‘AHH’ I screamed as I slided down the sand dune. But you’ll never guess
What I was safe because as I slided down a net stopped me.
‘Phew’ I whispered as I climbed up to the top. I saw my brother yell to me ’Are you ok’. I yelled out ‘yeah’. I decided to be more careful because
I really didn’t want to hurt myself because I have never broken
Any bones. I decided to pick another sand dune to climb and I picked a smaller one and one with a net of course. I really wanted to have a sliding
Contest but again no more climbing for me for a while oh well.
‘BRRRRRR’ went a car. ‘AHHHHH’. I screamed and fell down the sand dune
But there was no net so of course I kept rolling but luckily I wasn’t
Hurt. This time my brother just laughed and rolled down the hill
Himself and practically landed on me.
Thursday, October 14, 2010
free writing (15.10.10)
I listen to my ipod in the car so I don't get bored. Finally we get there it doesn't look to flash but
oh well I know it will be fun.
my dad check's in and gets our key it says number six so we are up stairs. I race up there first and my dad comes after me and unlocks the door!
Tuesday, September 21, 2010
The Wild Concert.
Sunday, September 12, 2010
free writing 10 ( 13.9.10)
ah that's better now my page is full.