Tuesday, September 21, 2010

The Wild Concert.

I am going to write about:
My dance
Getting changed
And hanging out in the green room. well I just talked to my friends in the green room and I did well in our class dance.

Gosh tonight is the big night I thought as I noisily rush to the back of the regent trembling with excitement 'Don't get to excited'. said Mum. 'I won't Mum'. I said , Bye. Oh there's Alana Oh doesn't her hair look curly. 'Wow Alana who curled your hair'. I said. 'Its naturally like this' said Alana. 'oh'. I said. 'well lets go In' said a voice and it was Hannah, 'Hi Hannah' I said. And there's Linda too well lets go to the green room I said. As we get to the green room we start talking for about 20 minutes then it is our turn to do the dance Halloween well I get on stage and dance my best Oh this is so fun I thought when we go to the change rooms to get changed into our class costume I start giggling heaps then I head back down to the green room ready for our dance when we get on the stage I am way to excited but I do my best and at the end of the dance I hear someone yell out GO EMMA!!! that was probably my sister. As I quietly hurry off the stage I told Linda I heard my sister say Go Emma and she said she heard too. As we rush up the rail to the girls toilets Linda and I giggle lots because we are so excited as we get to the wings of the stage Linda and I find a seat. Then it is finally time for the finale I do my best and see my family and wave like crazy.

1 comment:

  1. Great work Emma! It's an awesome piece of writing and I can tell that you enjoyed the show!
    I would have put you at Level 3 but you didn't use paragraphs so for this piece of writing you are a level 2.
    Well done!!

    -Madi

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