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The under water adventure
‘Brrrrrr’ went the submarine as we started it up. The submarine was as yellow as the sun. We hoped into the submarine and started driving into the water. we saw some amazing fish swim by, It looked liked they were talking to each other and I found out they were I know that because I could hear them. They were saying ‘don’t get near that fishing rod or they will catch you and eat you up. So they swam away but the fishing rod went with them then I suddenly saw that the hook was caught on one of its tail then suddenly the fishing rod went up and so did one of the fish. I was so shocked it felt like someone had just shot me. I’d never seen that happen before. I told the others and they said they had seen it before. ‘THUMP’! ‘Wow what was that ’I said I looked a little bit scared but I looked out the window suddenly I heard someone say ‘hello sorry to frighten you I was just passing by’ said the voice I looked and saw it was a shark I just about fainted a shark had actually talked to me I was amazed. The shark was just about to go but I said ‘no don’t go do you no where the coral reef is’ I asked. ‘yes I do’ said the shark.’ Well can you take me there because I don’t know where to go’ I said. ‘ ok but do you have a wet suite, diving goggles and oxygen’. Said the shark. ‘yes I do’. I said. ‘well put it on’. Said the shark. So I put on my gear and went with the shark. I went on his back because I wasn’t as fast as him. We went up to the surface. I saw the sun it was as bright as a light. Then I saw my mum and dad come to the surface. ‘ hi mum hi dad’! I said. ‘I’m having the best day of my life’. I said.
Well done Emma I really like the idea of a fishing story by Kate
ReplyDeletegood work emma interesting story
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