Athletics Practice! ( 2.12.10 )

"You can do it" Shouted Alana. As I got ready to jump over the high jump. I sprinted towards the high jump sweating hard out and I jump as high as I can and land on the mat with a BUMP! I look to see if I have knocked the bar over but I had made it.

'Yay' I whispered to myself happily. I ran to the back of the line to have another go. Next is Alana's turn. "Go Alana" I shout hoping that she will make it. She runs and she jumps and she makes it just by one inch I am happy for her because she hates high jump I use to as well but not so much anymore.

Next is Hannah's turn, she makes it to, very easily though. Now it is Linda's turn. She run's and she jumps and just makes it.

Finally Last but not least here comes Natalya now I have to admite she is better than me at high jump but maybe not so much long jump well I don't know but right here it is her turn she run's and jumps and just knocks the bar over. OH NO she didn't make it but she try's again and just makes it. "Yay" I shout "Well done Natalya."

A bad start!!! WALT: write dialog.

Once upon a time there was two Rabbits and they lived on their own! There names were Emily and Lilly. Lilly was white and Emily was brown.

The bad thing was that they always argued about who slept where and who got the best food and ohhhhh they didn't even know that they were being very very greedy.

One night when it was raining Lilly started crying because she was scared that a thunder storm would come. "I wish mummy hadn't died." She weeped. "would you like me to get you the best grass i'm not very hungry tonight." said Emily anxiously. "Yes please." said Lilly lightning up a bit.

So Emily went and got the grass and came back with a whole handful of it. "That's kind of you." said Lilly thankfully. "Well we should both get to sleep now try not to be so scared night, night." said Emily sleepily.

"Wake up wake up." shouted Lilly "Today is the day we look for blackberries in the forest lets go." "OK" said Emily sleepily "Just let me get some breakfast first." "Sure" said Lilly excitedly.

So after breakfast they set of into the forest to pick Blackberries after a while they came to a bush that had lots of white seeds on it. "Are these the right ones" asked Emily.

"I think so maybe I don't know maybe we should come back tomorrow".

"OK" aggred Emily.

So they set off home and lived happily ever after.

My recount on leaving Riverdale School! :)

I am so sad I don't want to leave Riverdale but I have to. Some of the things I will always remember are cool camp, favorite friends, my teachers, QZealand quiddage, awesome athletics, super swimming in the scary school pool and lots more. I remember on my first day my mum cried her eyes out I will always remember that to. I will always remember Miss Soma too because she always helped me when I got bullied. It is very sad because she has left Riverdale School.



By Emma! :)

My term 4 writing moderation.

Emma Smith

Lc13

Riverdale School

20^th October 2010

Ideas-

I slipped. OWWW. Oh no. BRRRRRR.

‘Wait for me Patrick’. I called as I climbed the sand dunes.

‘NO’. He called. ‘Fine then’ I said.

Once I had climbed the first sand dune I sore him sliding down one. At once I hurried

Because I didn’t want to be left behind. As I got to the sand dune,

He had slided down I saw he was at the bottom waving to me.

‘Hi’ he said. As I waved back to him I leaned over a bit to far

And suddenly the sand from behind me moved and I slipped and fell.

‘AHH’ I screamed as I slided down the sand dune. But you’ll never guess

What I was safe because as I slided down a net stopped me.

‘Phew’ I whispered as I climbed up to the top. I saw my brother yell to me ’Are you ok’. I yelled out ‘yeah’. I decided to be more careful because

I really didn’t want to hurt myself because I have never broken

Any bones. I decided to pick another sand dune to climb and I picked a smaller one and one with a net of course. I really wanted to have a sliding

Contest but again no more climbing for me for a while oh well.

‘BRRRRRR’ went a car. ‘AHHHHH’. I screamed and fell down the sand dune

But there was no net so of course I kept rolling but luckily I wasn’t

Hurt. This time my brother just laughed and rolled down the hill

Himself and practically landed on me.

free writing (15.10.10)

yay we are going to waikanae for 2 nights I have been there before but only when I was little so I can't really remember. My sister and brother say there is a goat there called Lester but he will probably be dead by now.

I listen to my ipod in the car so I don't get bored. Finally we get there it doesn't look to flash but
oh well I know it will be fun.

my dad check's in and gets our key it says number six so we are up stairs. I race up there first and my dad comes after me and unlocks the door!

The Wild Concert.

I am going to write about:

My dance

Getting changed

And hanging out in the green room. well I just talked to my friends in the green room and I did well in our class dance.

Gosh tonight is the big night I thought as I noisily rush to the back of the regent trembling with excitement 'Don't get to excited'. said Mum. 'I won't Mum'. I said , Bye. Oh there's Alana Oh doesn't her hair look curly. 'Wow Alana who curled your hair'. I said. 'Its naturally like this' said Alana. 'oh'. I said. 'well lets go In' said a voice and it was Hannah, 'Hi Hannah' I said. And there's Linda too well lets go to the green room I said. As we get to the green room we start talking for about 20 minutes then it is our turn to do the dance Halloween well I get on stage and dance my best Oh this is so fun I thought when we go to the change rooms to get changed into our class costume I start giggling heaps then I head back down to the green room ready for our dance when we get on the stage I am way to excited but I do my best and at the end of the dance I hear someone yell out GO EMMA!!! that was probably my sister. As I quietly hurry off the stage I told Linda I heard my sister say Go Emma and she said she heard too. As we rush up the rail to the girls toilets Linda and I giggle lots because we are so excited as we get to the wings of the stage Linda and I find a seat. Then it is finally time for the finale I do my best and see my family and wave like crazy.

free writing 10 ( 13.9.10)

wow i am thinking what shall i write about oh i can't help starring at Hannah who is wearing a blue head band blue hair ties and a blue under layer wow she must really like blue. wow Kelly has got a new hair style after having her hair out and a pony tail for so long. wow Alan is scribbling on his page wanting to write every thing he can. Lucy is typing as fast as she can so she can get her writing finished in time. and i can tell Zia is thinking what to write. well what can i write i am trying to think of something oh maybe this will work. blaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa blaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa blaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa blaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa blaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
ah that's better now my page is full.

free Writing 9 ( 2.9.10)

all i am doing is looking at where the wild things are on the wall yes it sounds very BORING!!! but that is all i have to do! well maybe not wow Linda is a fast typer why am i getting distracted by Linda's typing focus Emma focus well maybe another time oh yay i just remembered that i have badminton tonight and Lucy's party tomorrow. wow things are very exciting for me oh and quiddage is tomorrow how cool! well i can't of anything else to write about so Emma Emma Emma Emma Emma Emma Emma Emma Emma Emma Emma Emma Emma Emma Emma Emma well do you think that, that is enough Emma's well OK bye then!

About days.

well yesterday was AWESOME. today is well a bit COOL. well I don't know what tomorrow will be maybe ANNOYING. or SILLY. and I don't what will be the day after tomorrow wow this is getting incredibly boring I shall write about something else.

Libby has got a LONGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG fringe. Kelly is staring at me and wow Linda is typing very fast.

Writing a play.

Trouble with homework. By Emma Smith.
characters:

Percy( main character)
Mr nadle ( the teacher)
jasmine (the friend of Percy)
Alice (the homework helper)

The scene is where they are in a classroom and Percy is having trouble with his homework and he doesn't know what to do.

Mr nadle: good morning every one how are you today!
Percy: not very good Mr nadle.
Mr nadle: whats wrong Percy?
Percy: don't worry i will sort it out my self Mr nadle.
Mr nadle: if you are still not sure do come to me Percy.
Percy: OK Mr Nadle.
Jasmine: hi Percy good morning Mr nadle.
Mr nadle: good morning jasmine how are you today?
Jasmine: good thank-you Mr nadle.
Alice:(Alice walks in to the classroom.) hi every one hi Percy why do you look so down?
Percy : Alice can i talk to you for a minute.
Alice: sure that is what I am here for come with me.
Percy: OK wait a second.


Alice: whats wrong you are acting weird?
Percy: that is because i am having trouble with my homework.(feeling worried)
Alice: OK what answer do you need help with and why didn't you ask Mr nadle he is here to help you.
Percy: cause I am to shy.
Alice: you should still try though and don't be scared Mr nadle won't tell you off.
Percy: well I think he will because I haven't told him my problem.can you please tell him?
Alice: well I am here to help you but I am not here to do things for you. you have to ask him. yourself. I will come with you though.
Percy: thank-you come on.
Alice: OK lets go and tell him.
Percy: Mr nadle can i tell you something.
Mr nadle: yes Percy, yes Alice.
Percy: Can you help me with my homework I don't know what to do.
Mr nadle: well why didn't you tell me earlier
Alice: because he thought you would growl at him. (she said that in a really nice way.)
Mr nadle: well I would never ever do that only if people don't try I growl.
Percy: thank-you Mr nadle for not telling me off.
Mr nadle: that is OK Percy but now you know i don't really growl at children.

The End!!!

Discribing my Puppet.

My puppets name is Pandy , Pandy is a boy but wants to be a girl so he dresses in pink and purple.
he is pink he has a light pink nose and yellowish Goldyish hair. He likes pink things to eat eg: candy floss raspberry fan-ta and strawberry's and raspberry's. He is the most girlie-st grovyest person in the world he has a pink-purple room and a pink duvet cover. He is very deaf and hears everything wrong if i say trouble he will think I'm saying bubble. he is very annoying and pokes and pinches people. his hobbies are drawing playing puppet shows and dress ups (as a girl.) He always is making cookies and putting pink food coloring in them. oh I forgot another of his hobbies its gardening he loves planting pink flowers like tulips and pink roses. and there is a weird thing about him he plays with girls not boys. He is always grumbling and complaining and moaning and he is not very smart like he isn't the greatest writer or reader in the world. he is very skinny even though he eats unhealthy food. I will explain to you why he doesn't have many friends at school.
1. he pokes and pushes people
2. he isn't a very smart person to work with
3. his personality is different to others ( it is weird.)
4. he is always rude and getting in trouble
5. this is a important reason he doesn't listen so he has no idea what to do when the teacher sends the class off to do their work, that is why no one wants to work with him. I don't like him much myself because he is the most questioning and annoy-ingest person in the universe.

describing alteration.

The music was loud. she felt like dancing.
The music was thumping through the hole entire house the girl was tempted to dance.

Jane wasn't allowed to join in their game.
Jane got angrily angry because her enemy's Ena and Anna wouldn't let her join in the game too.

the waves were high. the boat was small.
the wacking waves were much higher than the smiley small boat.

the plane flew over their heads. it was very loud.
the planky plane flew over all the peoples heads nosily.

A poor man of afghanistan

this man looks like he is one hundred years old
he looks as cold as a person would in Antarctica
it looks like his family hasn't looked after him properly and he has been misrable all his life
it looks like he hasn't eaten in about 1 month because he looks really hungry
he probably hasn't got a nice house and i can tell that because he looks poor because he is out on the streets
he looks like he hasn't got much clothes
he looks as old as a 1000 year old mummy
it looks like he is a nice man and i can tell that because it looks like he is smiling and his eyes look
really nice
and the wrinkles in his forehead look like they are big cracks
he has got a turban around his head and a big blanket of fur around his hole body
i8t either looks like his family has left him or died or gone to live in another country, city or a town. i think that if he doesn't have food or water he could find a near by river or lake and try to catch some fish and drink some water from that river or the lake ( only if it is clean though).

practising for the cross country

WHOOSH as I put a counter in the container I was on my second lap for the practise cross country run I was so puffed I wanted to stop but I knew I would hafe to do it at morning tea and I didn't want to because I hate running so I carried on running. I was running with Alana I wanted to run ahead of her but I was just to puffed so i stayed with her. I was as puffed as a bull who had ran for an hour when i had done 3 laps I was so puffed I thought my legs would drop off. after a while I had just about done four laps but Mrs Kenyon said stop but she also said that if we were past the cone closest to the counters we could put one in Yay I said. I had got off to a bad start in the practise for the cross country but at least I had done 4 laps.

the under water adventure

5.5.10

The under water adventure

‘Brrrrrr’ went the submarine as we started it up. The submarine was as yellow as the sun. We hoped into the submarine and started driving into the water. we saw some amazing fish swim by, It looked liked they were talking to each other and I found out they were I know that because I could hear them. They were saying ‘don’t get near that fishing rod or they will catch you and eat you up. So they swam away but the fishing rod went with them then I suddenly saw that the hook was caught on one of its tail then suddenly the fishing rod went up and so did one of the fish. I was so shocked it felt like someone had just shot me. I’d never seen that happen before. I told the others and they said they had seen it before. ‘THUMP’! ‘Wow what was that ’I said I looked a little bit scared but I looked out the window suddenly I heard someone say ‘hello sorry to frighten you I was just passing by’ said the voice I looked and saw it was a shark I just about fainted a shark had actually talked to me I was amazed. The shark was just about to go but I said ‘no don’t go do you no where the coral reef is’ I asked. ‘yes I do’ said the shark.’ Well can you take me there because I don’t know where to go’ I said. ‘ ok but do you have a wet suite, diving goggles and oxygen’. Said the shark. ‘yes I do’. I said. ‘well put it on’. Said the shark. So I put on my gear and went with the shark. I went on his back because I wasn’t as fast as him. We went up to the surface. I saw the sun it was as bright as a light. Then I saw my mum and dad come to the surface. ‘ hi mum hi dad’! I said. ‘I’m having the best day of my life’. I said.